Sunday, December 26, 2010

may i feel said he - Poem by E. E. Cummings

may i feel said he - Poem by E. E. Cummings

May the morning find you in lover's embrase,

V

 
may i feel said he by E. E. Cummings


may i feel said he
(i'll squeal said she
just once said he)
it's fun said she


(may i touch said he
how much said she
a lot said he)
why not said she


(let's go said he
not too far said she
what's too far said he
where you are said she)


may i stay said he
(which way said she
like this said he
if you kiss said she


may i move said he
is it love said she)
if you're willing said he
(but you're killing said she


but it's life said he
but your wife said she
now said he)
ow said she


(tiptop said he
don't stop said she
oh no said he)
go slow said she


(cccome?said he
ummm said she)
you're divine!said he
(you are Mine said she)


Come explore cummings.... but after your morning pleasures...

Veritas

4 comments:

Lisette.MacIntyre said...

This is a lovely poem, and it made me smile...

Thank you *kisses*

Veritas said...

I loved it the moment I saw it...
I am developing a taste for cummings,

Oh, did I just say that?

He he,
Veritas

Melia said...

i found myself grinning at the screen......

I love this poem..... good choice x

Veritas said...

It really is... I have Crafty Green Poet to thank for making me go and take a long look at his work. I have zero training in poetry and am a dullard if anyone were to try and teach me some. But I get a great deal of pleasure out of writing them. Check out the Twelve days Jenny started, i 'vee been adding to it as the days go by, added day ten just today. It is a great poem....

I can just see myself in the scene...

Veritas

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